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Early one morning

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Submitted on: October 27, 2012
Image Size: 201 KB
Resolution: 1083×668
Submitted with: Sta.sh

Views: 1,178
Favourites: 322 (who?)
Comments: 87

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Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 60D
Shutter Speed: 1/166 second
Aperture: F/5.6
Focal Length: 50 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Date Taken: October 12, 2012
Lens: EF50mm f/1.4 USM
Software: Microsoft Windows Photo Viewer 6.1.7600.16385
Sensor Size: 15mm

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Critique by ~TheRubberTurtle Apr 9, 2013, 1:23:30 PM

I'm not good nor a pro at photography, i can't comment on your techniques and vice versa. So, I'm going through the views as a photo admirer. This photo shows and deliver very well of what you want people to see and feel. I feel inspired, motivated, and full of spirit. The sun bursting through the trees, those rays, beautiful! But the land is kinda "grayscale" in my opinion. If you keep(or make, if the grayscale part was from original photo) the land/grass/mud puddle(?) with orange/yellow-ish color, it would bring out the sensational feeling better. It will really shows that the sun rays are really bursting out, reaching to the hearts of people. All in all, it's a very good work.

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Critique by !PurpleHeartPictures Oct 27, 2012, 5:03:31 AM

I really like this a lot! It's a great photo and you got a great shot! It definitely captures the dawn of a new day and I feel like the wooded area is lighting up with life. There are only a few things that I would change about this photo. I notice that there is a vehicle on the left side next to the trees. Although it's rather unnoticable compared to the entire picture, it could take away from the natural feel and look. The other thing is I would add a little more color to the grass, maybe have the sun shining down those warm colors on the grass. Though I feel high unqualified to critique this piece, I hope that all helps. Again, this is a great photo, and you captured something great right at the right time!